99 word prompt : True grit
September 5, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that shows true grit. You can use the phrase or embody the theme. Who or what has true grit? Go where the prompt leads you!
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“I wasn’t this way when I was twenty,” I told my new therapist.
“What created such anxiety,” she asked.
“My husband might get out of prison soon,” I said, lifting my shirt to show her a scar. “I’m scared he’ll hurt our children.”
“Knife wound?” She asked. I nodded yes. “How old are they?”
“Eight and ten. If he serves his time, they’ll be eighteen and twenty…”
Between heaving sobs, I explained about his upcoming hearing for early release. Good. She was forming tears.
It takes courage to stab yourself with a knife. Anything to keep that parasite away.
Maternal instinct = True grit indeed.
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It is a great story.
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Thanks. 🙂
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A pleasure!
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Oooh, this is quite frightening.
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Thanks. 🙂
After writing it, I didn’t know who the real “bad guy” was in this story.
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Oh tat’s an emotional post. Great one indeed✨👏 well written..
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Thanks. 🙂
I’m glad you liked it.
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Twisty twist. But there it is, she had to do what she had to do.
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The bad guy is the system that keeps them locked in desperation. Powerful writing. What a twist.
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Thanks. 🙂
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