99 word prompt : river of consciousness
January 28, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about life as a river of consciousness. Think about the possibilities of the prompt. Go where the prompt leads!
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We gather the dust of life, floating inside a watery womb.
We burst into a world too cold, light too bright, sounds too harsh, searching for sustenance.
Held in soft arms, comforted by a lullaby, we forget that once we floated in God’s arms, listening to celestial music.
Our universe becomes a nuclear family, adults become gods that fall from favor once we discover their flaws. We become gods to a new generation and fear the loss of our borrowed time.
We cast away the dust of life to float in a universe of joy… knowing we’re finally home.
Beautifully written
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Thanks. 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Stardust to stardust.
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Yes.
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This is wonderful Joelle!
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I really like this 💜
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💜💜💜
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Lovely and profound. ❤
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Life, said In 99 words is just amazing. “Stardust” and that’s the truth. well done Joelle.
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Thanks. 😃
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Oh wow! That’s gorgeous.
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The circle of life in 99 words. Wonderful.
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Thanks. 🙂 That is exactly what I was trying to portray.
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Wow. That sums it up! Beautifully done.
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