99 word prompt : crowning glory
July 30, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that uses the phrase “her crowning glory.” It can be in the traditional sense of a woman’s hair or applied to any idea of a best attribute. What happens if you play with the meaning or gender? Go where the prompt leads!
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Queen Catherine loved her silver crown inset with sapphires and diamonds. She sat quietly on a smaller throne, a trait expected of the window dressing sitting next to her husband, and sank into mental soliloquy.
Her only sister had a washerwoman’s build and face. Catherine, graceful and filled with a legendary beauty, was traded into loveless marriage at 15 for a substantial fee. Women envied Catherine, but her sister chose to read, chose to be tutored by scholars, and still lived with her brothers.
Catherine had chosen the design of her crown.
Why did it seem a hollow victory?
My blue bonnet lies over the ocean. My blue bonnet lies over the sea. My blue bonnet lies over the ocean. Oh, bring back my blue bonnet to me. To me. So that I can cover my crowning glory. So that I can cover my head. So, I can cover my crowning glory. Or maybe I can use yours instead… Your green bonnet looks better than mine does. Your green bonnet looks better to me. Your green bonnet looks better than mine does. Oh, give up your green bonnet to me. Oh, give up your green bonnet to me.
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Must be the engineers theme song. 🙂
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Good one
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Thanks. 🙂
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I was thinking about the title, I didn’t quite understand the topic at first, then samples at Carrot ranch and ur story gave me some idea. Time to think a concept 😉 I liked your story, Excellent Reading ✨ Have a wonderful day Joelle ✨
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Thanks. 🙂
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Such a lovely tale. I like how you started with the focus on the crown and end with the sad realization of the queen’s stifled potential.
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Thanks. 🙂
I kept imagining how she would grow to hate the life of a loveless marriage, giving birth to children and serving as part of the decorations.
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Yep. You told a telling tale. Sad. Well done.
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Thanks. 🙂
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