99 Word Prompt : What’s in a name?
July 9, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes that answers the question, who is Monreal Dorb. You can imagine the life of this fictitious person in any era or circumstance. Is there cause and effect at play? Go where the prompt leads!
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I remembered Monreal Dorb long before he changed his name to Monty Dorn, though 40 years had passed. Skinny, pale, cursed with an arrowhead nose, he’d spent hours in a gym and changed his face, but there was one thing he couldn’t change.
I shuddered at Monty’s dark brown eyes staring into me as Mr. Smith screamed…and his wicked smile! I’d witnessed Monty doing something to our teacher’s chair pad, and dared not tell the principal about it.
So many people were shocked that debonair Dr. Dorn was arrested for child sex trafficking and murder.
Everyone but me.
The way you delivered it, really amazing. 😍 and the end is a perfect lunch line ✨ Loved it Joelle 😃👍 Have a peaceful night ✨🤗
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Thanks. 🙂
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Yikes. Beyond spam.
Glad this one was caught. Can him.
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There are times when people have creeped me out like that. It’s chilling.
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Yep.
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You nailed the creep-factor in this flash, Joelle. Eyes like that would likely not change even when all else does.
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