#Weekly Prompt #Poetry Challenge – Week 107 – Participate & Grooming
If you want to participate, here’s the link: https://ramblingsofawriter2016.com/2018/08/01/weekly-tanka-prompt-poetry-challenge-week-107-participate-grooming/
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Double Etheree – Two Etheree stanzas, where the second one is reversed.Syllabic count: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 Rhyme not required
Participate in life!
Do
you want
to live in
a room safely
mourning your freedom?
Climb that sprawling oak tree,
stand atop a jungle Jim,
walk a forest trail listening
to nightfall howling in the distance,
daring to create your finest moments.
We groom our children to accept a cage,
mental prisons formed from safety’s bars,
denying their need to prepare
for a universal truth…
Safe is an illusion.
Seek out adventure,
feel life flowing
inside you,
where joy
waits.
©Joelle LeGendre
That was beautiful, I loved reading that, so very true, it is a very interesting form of poetry to write. Have a nice day.
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Thanks for your kind words.
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Loaded question much? Cheers,H
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No, just common sense. 🙂
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I misunderstood. Never mind. Cheers,H
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No worries. 🙂
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A great insight, beautifully written.
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Thanks. 🙂
You and I have had to learn this in our lives.
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Yes, indeed we did.
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