99 word prompt : crane
May 10, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story defining “the charisma of cranes.” For centuries, cranes have inspired art and philosophy. You can write a crane story or create something new out of the phrase. Go where the prompt leads.
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“I love cranes,” Emma said, looking up at the sky.
“They are magnificent,” Lester smiled.
Her hair glistened midnight at him, eyes so dark a universe lived inside. He loved their first date, her eyes closed to enjoy Debussy’s La Mer. Her impeccable manners at the city’s best restaurant, an ability to hold intelligent conversations about politics…he’d hoped she’d be the one.
“There’s a fund-raiser for Whooping Cranes next week…”
“I’m a structural engineer,” Emma said, pointing to the skyscraper under construction. “That’s the only kind of crane I like.”
“Goodbye, Emma.”
She smiled as he strutted away.
nice twist, well written!
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Thanks. 🙂
Arrogant men are such fodder for twists.
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sounds like you’ve met a few, and you are obviously the heroine … 🙂
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I married a few of them, too. 🙂
Wish I could say it was an easy lesson to learn. Some of us take longer to “get it” than others.
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so many pick different men, same problem … need to look at and know our patterns in order to escape our bad choices 🙂
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Oh dear, Lester is very particular, isn’t he? LOL Amanda
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And so is Emma. 🙂
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Yes, I guess you’re right. 🙂
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LOL! I enjoy writing stories about people who are hard to love. I’d say both Emma and Lester are “pieces of work.” 🙂
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True.
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Hope you are having a nice weekend. I have nominated you for the “3 days Quote Challenge”.
https://ramblingsofawriter2016.com/2018/05/13/3-days-quote-challenge-day-three-forget-me-not-3/
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Thanks. 🙂
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Better to know earlier than later. Well done.
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Thanks. 🙂
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