Thursday photo #prompt: Fallen #writephoto
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Stone crumbles, stars fall.
Time worships no deity,
kneeling to nothing.
Knowing not emotion or
mortality, it proceeds.
© Joelle LeGendre
Oh, this one is excellent! 🙂 Amanda
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Thanks. 🙂
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‘Time worships no deity’… love that line, Joelle.
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It was the first line I wrote, then I counted 7 syllables and said, “There here’s a tanka.” 🙂
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It would have been almost impolite not to use is as such 🙂
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LOL!
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good one!
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Thanks. 🙂
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a pleasure 🙂
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Wow, so much said in so few words.
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Thanks. 🙂
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Excellent poem. Loved the time worships no deity line.
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I just read yours, and thought about all the first responders who come across that kind of scene too many times.
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