99 word prompt : sequestered
December 28, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a wishing star. It can be central to the story or used in a different way. You can have a character interact or not. Go where the prompt leads.
If you want to participate, here’s the link: https://carrotranch.com/2017/12/28/december-28-flash-fiction-challenge/
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“We have a proverb,” The farmer said. “A child looks to the starry skies and sees hope…”
“Whatever does that mean?” A man in strange green uniform asked.
“Allow me to finish,” The farmer scoffed. “…but the wise woman sees drought.”
“Where are your men?”
“We have one per 100 women, and those are sequestered away,” she said. “When men rule, destruction reigns.”
He spoke into a box on his shoulder and said. “Kill them all!”
“We don’t wish upon stars, we develop our minds” she chuckled. A starship and their crew turned to dust. “Prepare to be sequestered.”
©Joelle LeGendre
Ooooh!
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Don’t you just love the irony?
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I did indeed!!!!
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You are definitely onto something here.
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I’ve wondered what would have happened if the Aztec’s could have done that to the Conquistadors. 🙂
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LOL. Put women in charge and the world would be a different place indeed. Is there enough places to sequester to though?
Happy New Year Joelle.
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I suppose a lot would have to do with how long you keep them in the brothel before permanently retiring them. 🙂
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Most interesting notion I have to say…happy New Year Joelle, hope 2018 is a good one for you.
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I thought it was an intriguing idea.
🙂
Personally, I’d rather see equality. And equality means that everyone’s work is recognized as equally important and valid, whether a person is a rocket scientist or managing a household while a spouse is working for pay.
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Ha ha ha ha ha. This could be a distinct possibility in the not so distant future 🙂 Happy new year!
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Thanks. 🙂
Hope women around the world have a better new year, too.
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Woahhh 😍😍😍
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Nice sci-fi writing, Joelle. I love how he interrupts her and then goes on to speak death and then goes on to command her fate, when all along, she was trying to tell him!
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Don’t you just love it when a person thinks he has all the power, fails to listen, and then finds out the truth when it’s too late? 🙂
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It’s satisfying to read!
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