Thursday photo #prompt – Fading #writephoto
“Mama, it looks like a horse on fire,” little Jeffrey said, pulling at his mother’s shirt. “Can’t we help him? Please?”
“It’s only a cloud, sweetie pie,” she said. His little arms wrapped around her as far as they would go, his tears falling on her chest. She felt the rough-hewn wood of an unfinished pier under her thin-soled shoes and wished that her son had so little discomfort to complain about in his 5 short years of life. “Soon the sun will be down and the clouds will drop rain all over us.”
His lower lip trembled. “They cry ’cause their stomach hurts.”
She gently kissed his bald head. “Does your stomach hurt?”
Tears turned to sobs. She reached into the pocket containing peppermints infused with pain medication, slipping a small wafer into his mouth. In a minute, his pain would subside, and once she tucked him into bed next to her, he’d sleep for hours.
By 2025 society regained its sanity, allowing those with no hope to end their own suffering. It took a few more years for laws allowing parents to make that choice for a child with no hope of seeing another year.
No more needles or chemotherapy, no more attempts to stem the progression of a brain tumor that refused to go away. Choosing the day of his death — that was a simple matter. Nature, however, refused to cooperate.
He was here, with her, on this glorious day to watch the sunset. Above all else, he loved listening to water gently lap against the shore while he pointed at a cloud with a tiny finger and giggled at the sights his imagination created. Sunrise or sunset, it didn’t matter, as long as the celestial fireball floated over an ocean horizon.
Tomorrow, on this pier, they’d watch the sun rise together. At his happiest moment she’d offer him a chocolate drop, his favorite, and hold him in her arms until his last, soft, breath whispered to the clouds, “I’m finally home.”
Beautifully written, sad subject. Life can be so unkind at times. Brutal. Cheers,H
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Thanks for the kind words. It was hard to write, and I had to grab a few tissues, but that’s the story that came from looking at the picture.
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You were right about needing tissues…
I wonder how any of us would cope with those choices were we made free of them…
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That is the question, how would we cope? It takes greater strength to remain calm in that storm than I fear I possess.
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When my late husband was dying, we did discuss this in some depth. He died before it came to making such choices, but I would have made them in accordance with his wishes.
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I’ve been there, too.
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You never know how you will feel or how you will respond until you have.
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My children were 5 and 7 when their dad died. It’s easy to look back and see what might have been done differently.
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Mine were young teens. Yes, looking back shows many possibilities.
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Oh, this is so moving, and tore at my heartstrings.
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I think it’s a parent’s worse nightmare.
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It is.
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Nice story about a difficult choice.
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…made more difficult by having and entire night to think about it. That kind of hell I hope I never have to face.
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An incredibly powerful story about a subject that I certainly don’t know if I could cope adequately with. Kudos. Amanda
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Thanks for reading. Sometimes a story just comes to you from a picture, even if it’s one that makes you cry while you’re writing it.
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Very true. That has happened to me too. 🙂
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It’s a writer’s blessing. 🙂
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