99 word prompt : Landing
July 13, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about an unexpected landing. It can be acrobatic, an unplanned move or created into a metaphor. Go where the prompt, or chickens, lead.
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He lifted a slender finger, pointing toward a log cabin at the edge of their landing site. What strange beige creatures and only half his height. The indigenous population scattered into the woods, their screams amusing.
“What is this place called again, love?”
“This continent calls it Earth,” she replied.
He furrowed a grey brow. “No understanding of the universal balance. Class zero planet. Recommend eradication and repopulation.”
“Negative,” she frowned. “The universal mind says this is designated as a prison planet for incorrigible souls.”
“What happened to Mars?”
“They destroyed that in a war.”
“Next stop?’ he sighed.
You may be closer to the truth than you realise….good response..
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YEP – ‘Nuff Said 😀
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a prison planet for incorrigible souls………. very sad much a bit close to truth.
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It is rather a sinister concept, but given some of the things most of us have seen, it does seem plausible.
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It was working anyway, but then that sigh… that sigh really made it work.
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Earth — planet of incorrigible souls. That seems to fit! A fun take on the prompt, and I like the added twist about Mars.
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I was laughing as I wrote it. 🙂
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That’s a good sign it’s an entertaining piece!
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Ha ha ha ha! Just what we deserve!
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It does seem fitting. 🙂
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Oh dear. Incorrigible souls. Now I understand! Well done.
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