99 word #prompt #flashfiction : Traded
May 11, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about trading. It can be the profession of old or of modern day traders on Wall Street. It can be trading places or lunches at school. What is traded? Is it a fair deal or a dupe? Trade away and go where the prompt leads you.
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“I traded one problem in for another,” I muttered at my new 1976 Plymouth Volaré, a car destined to become the Edsel of its time.
“Problem?” the dealership mechanic asked.
“If the speedometer works, the hot/cold indicator doesn’t. Now I’m hearing a rattle in back.”
After 4 years, the electrical problem continued to plague us, but we found the rattle when my dad and husband took out the back seat…an empty tape roll on which a bored factory worker had scribbled, “Haha, find this.”
“I should’ve kept the Plymouth Fury III,” I sighed
Dad replied, “I told you so.”
No. Love the black one……I grew up in an orange and black Valiant Charger………soon to feature on Hellonwheels.
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Wish I still had that Plymouth Fury III. It probably would’ve been a lot easier to repair — and it was like a tank.
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You made me laugh!! I wonder how many times that “roll of tape” experience happens!
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Years after it happened, it was funny. That’s the way a lot of things are in life. 🙂
It literally took years to find. The car was never put together right and the stick shift was always a “sick” shift — too much play in it.
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I thought that was fiction! Oh my! I wouldn’t have been laughing either.
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My first lesson about the fact that “new” is not the same as “better.” 🙂
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Great read! X
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Thanks. 🙂
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That’s a funny! Just a factory worker looking to connect.
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…in rather sinister ways. 🙂
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Makes you wonder if he did this to other cars?
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I did wonder about that too. 🙂
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What a great flash!
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Appreciate the compliment. Thanks. 🙂
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Haha – funny little trick! That would definitely drive me up the wall to hear that so long. Nice bit of nostalgia in here, too.
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Thanks. 🙂
It’s always funnier years later.
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That is always true!
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Oh boy! What a prank.
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Things like that make you wonder about the human race.
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They do indeed.
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