Silver’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Prompt Challenge #3 Hope & Wait
Sunlight draws shadows
wind dances, limbs sway, turning
pines into music.
Wait, hope, follow the moonlight;
watch shadows echo your dreams.
Sunlight draws shadows
wind dances, limbs sway, turning
pines into music.
Wait, hope, follow the moonlight;
watch shadows echo your dreams.
Beautiful… made me feel as though I could dance! ❤
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Thanks. 🙂
When I write something that comes out in a flow like that, I worry that no one will feel it as I did. Thanks for letting me know that you felt it, too.
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What a great tanka, Joelle. I love the idea of dancing in the moonlight! Well done! ❤
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Thanks. 🙂
It feels good to know that both Annette and you felt the rhythm of it.
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That’s when you know you did well. ❤
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thanks for reblogging. 🙂
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Oh, I’m especially crazy for that last line!!!
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Thanks. 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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